Ask: Heads up on Black and Blue… You’re missing “to” in “I want you (to) remember my face at it’s angriest.” Also, based on your cadence and rhythm, I think you missed a “you” in “And I want (you) to remember, I will be leaving new bruises on you very soon.” I could be wrong since it makes sense either way. Also, beautiful post. ♥️ Not expecting you to answer this, just thought you’d want to know.
Thank you to everyone for giving me grammatical advice and spotting typos. I fucking love this.
I am planning on taking all these posts to Kindle Volumes, including Asks and old Asks that are not here but from the old blog too. These grammar changes are huge for me.